Beyonce. She is my idol
학생이 쓴 원문
Absolutely Beyonce.
She is my idol. Everything perfect.
Vocal, dance, act, visual and she\'s mind.
I respect everything about her.
I can\'t forget when I first watched her live video on youtube, it\'s just shock to me.
I had no choice to say that it was perfect.
That\'s why she is my idol.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann!
Beyonce is an icon and legend. She is indeed one of the best performers in the world. :)
Absolutely Beyonce.
>> Absolutely, Beyonce.
She is my idol. Everything perfect.
>> She is my idol and everything about her is perfect.
Vocal, dance, act, visual and she\'s mind.
>> Her voice, appearance, dancing skills and mind is good.
I respect everything about her.
>> CORRECT
I can\'t forget when I first watched her live video on youtube, it\'s just shock to me.
>> I can\'t forget the first time I\'ve watched her live video on YouTube. She amazed me.
I had no choice to say that it was perfect.
>> I had no choice but to say that it was perfect.
That\'s why she is my idol.
>> CORRECT
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