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2010-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Bianca

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Hi!Bianca I don't know what I can write here. Can you tell me what can I write on? And I will not able to study with you for 3 days. I'm so sad but I have to go to a crammer 3 days more. Then I will study at home myself. And my dad fixed my web camera so you can see me next time.:D

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Hey [이름]!  Nice to hear from you! Its a good thing you asked dear :) This page will help you enhance you writing skills, so maybe on a weekend you can visit this page and tell me anything that you have in mind, like maybe your weekend plans with your friends and your family, school or just about anyhting you have in mind, it doesn't have to be done every week only if you've got time, but if you wish to do so, then that would be fine as well. :)  Good luck with your studies! You're a very smart girl, you can do it! Looking forward to finally seeing you the next time around! c",     Corrections:  Hi!Bianca>> Hi, Bianca.I don't know what I can write here. Can you tell me what can I write on?>> I don't know what to write about. Could you give me an idea of what I could write about?And I will not able to study with you for 3 days.>> not be able I'm so sad but I have to go to a crammer 3 days more. Then I will study at home myself.>> I feel sad, but I have to cram for 3 more days, and study at home all by myself.And my dad fixed my web camera so you can see me next time.:D >> so you could view me next time.

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