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2019-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi elly, Yesterday was too hard to me. So, I fell a sleep on the sofa. When I grew up in the Morning, I found myself on the sofa, But, Today is Happy Friday. :) Recently, I have been reading The bible and done to read The John. Do you know Who was loved by Jesus? I think it was John. Oh. It\'s time to meet you already.

강사 첨삭

Hello Fred,

Thank you so much for today’s class.

Please keep up the good work!

Have an awesome weekend and talk to again on Monday!

Teacher ELLY.

Bible

Hi Elly,

Yesterday was too hard to me.

CORRECT!

or>>It was a tough day for me yesterday.

So, I fell asleep on the sofa.

CORRECT!

or>>So, I went to sleep on the couch.

or>>So, I just slept on the sofa.

When I grew up in the Morning, I found myself on the sofa,

>>When I woke up in the morning, I found myself on the sofa.

But, Today is Happy Friday. :)

>>But, today is a Happy Friday. :)

Recently, I have been reading The bible and done to read The John.

>>Recently, I have been reading the bible and I am now done reading the book of John.

Do you know who was loved by Jesus?

CORRECT!

or>>Do you know who Jesus loved the most?

I think it was John.

CORRECT!

or>>I have a good guess that it was John.

Oh. It\'s time to meet you already. 

CORRECT!

or>>Oh, it\'s already our class time and for me to call you. 

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