BIG
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!
I\'ve heard about this film but I haven\'t seen it yet!
Your little synopsis here makes me want to watch it!
I\'m definitely watching it this weekend.
It actually sounds like a Korean drama (with the same title) that I\'ve seen before.
Thanks for doing your homework.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
BIG is my all-time favorite English movie, starring Tom Hanks.
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OR:
>> The movie, \"Big\", starring Tom Hanks, is my all-time favorite English movie.
Thirteen-years-old boy, Josh fulfills his wish that he wants to be a thirty-years-old grown-up by Magician Zolta machine.
>> Thirteen-year-old boy, Josh, fulfills his wish to become a thirty-year-old adult, through the help of the Magician Zolta Machine.
His family regards grown-up Josh as a crazy man and kicks him out.
>> His family thought grown-up Josh is a crazy man and kicks him out.
To make a living, Josh enters a toy company thanks to fake resume.
>> To make a living, Josh enters a toy company, thanks to a fake resume.
The big boy shows his ability in a innocent view of a kid in the company and meets a beautiful woman who likes Josh\'s ability and innocence.
>> He shows his ability in understanding the innocence of kids and then meets a beautiful woman who likes his ability and innocence.
They fall in love and make love.
>> CORRECT!
However, the time Josh has to decide whether he stays with his loving girlfriend or he goes back to his family visits him.
>> However, the time comes when Josh has to decide whether he should stay with his loving girlfriend or go back to his family.
The end?
>> CORRECT!
I will not let you know.
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t want to be a spoiler. ^.^;
>> CORRECT!
In this movie, I had chances to think over the real meaning of a grown-up.
>> In this movie, I had a chance to think about the real meaning of being a grown-up.
I sometimes ask myself that I am a grown-up.
>> I sometimes ask myself if I am really a grown-up.
The answer is not yet.
>> CORRECT!
I\'m still a growing.
>> I\'m still growing.
To tell the truth, I want to be a growing to the last breath of my life.
>> To tell you the truth, I want to continue growing until I take my last breath.
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