big problem
학생이 쓴 원문
hi lei ^^
first, thanks for class
My right arm was broken at last Lunar New Years Day(Seol-Nal) vacation. I couldn't think that it will be a big problem because I was absolutely sure it will be treated until Midterm exam. But now it isnt!!!! As exam begining next week, I still can not use right hand. I try to write by left hand. It's hard but that is only way to solve this problem I think. However, looking on the bright side, it could be a goooooood chance to practice left hand!!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
I am really sorry to hear about your injury. I was actually worried when you told me during our first class that you had an injury and that you will have an exam the next week. Well you still have time to practice your left hand. I wish you good luck with that. Anyways, you passed here a good composition. Most of your sentences are correct but some just had minor lapses (mostly excessive use of conjunctions and fillers). But it’s a good one. Keep it up. See you later [이름].
Lei J
hi lei ^^first, thanks for class>>First, I want to thank you for our class
My right arm was broken at last Lunar New Years Day(Seol-Nal) vacation.
>> My right arm was broken last Lunar New Years Day (Seol-Nal) vacation
I couldn't think that it will be a big problem because I was absolutely sure it will be treated until Midterm exam.
>>correct
But now it isnt!!!!
>>correct
As exam begining next week, I still can not use right hand.
>>Exams will begin next week, I still can’t use my right hand
I try to write by left hand.
>>I tried to write using my left hand
It's hard but that is only way to solve this problem I think.
>> It's hard but I think that it is only way to solve this problem.
However, looking on the bright side, it could be a goooooood chance to practice left hand!!
>> Looking on the bright side, it could be a goooooood chance for me to practice my left hand!!
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