Biggest goal in my life

2022-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

학생이 쓴 원문

My biggest goal now is to master English. I am studying English hard to achieve this goal. I have been taking video lessons with my teacher and buying books to study. I\'m trying to memorize English words and I\'m trying to be consistent. I\'m trying to find out and remember things that I don\'t know or make mistakes. I want to master English, achieve my goal, go abroad and travel comfortably.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Hazel! ^^
I really hope that you will reach all your goals. 
Keep striving and reaching for your dreams. ^^

- T. Rina

1. I am studying English hard to achieve this goal.
>> CORRECT!

2. I have been taking video lessons with my teacher and buying books to study.
>> CORRECT!

3. I\'m trying to memorize English words and I\'m trying to be consistent. 
>> CORRECT!

4. I\'m trying to find out and remember things that I don\'t know or make mistakes.
>> CORRECT!

5. I want to master English, achieve my goal, go abroad and travel comfortably.
>> CORRECT!

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