Bill Gates
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Bill Gates is rechest man in the world. He is very smart. He's age 13 he was programming computers all by himself. So I want to being Bill gates. Because he was smart and very rich.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, wow! You have a very big dream. I know that you will be able to achieve this dream if you\'ll study hard and practice what you\'ve learned. Keep your dreams and hold on to it. I believe that you can do it! Take care and enjoy the weekend.
__T. Ritchel \",)__
Bill Gates is rechest man in the world.
>>>Correct
or
>>>The richest man in the world is Bill Gates.
He is very smart.
>>>Correct
He\'s age 13 he was programming computers all by himself.
>>>He was only 13 when he started programming computers all by himself.
So I want to being Bill gates.
>>>So, I want to become like Bill Gates.
Because he was smart and very rich.
>>>Because he is smart and very rich.
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