biomedical engineering

2013-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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I majored in Biomedical Engineering. It is the application of engineering principles and techniques to the medical field. I’ve studied about basic theory of medical devices, electronic, medical law, and biosensor in addition to biochemistry, anatomy and physiology for understanding the human body. I realized that that knowledge would be really helpful to do my work, so I've kept studying. That's why I'm good at understanding medical disease and devices. Also, my previous experiences would help me achieve good performance of KFDA approval and Quality system maintenance.

강사 첨삭

A VERY HAPPY MONDAY TO YOU, [이름]! Once again I would like to commend you for doing a great job on your composition. You\'re very good when it comes to expressing your ideas and opinions. Keep it up! I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow. Take care! I majored in Biomedical Engineering. >>CORRECT! It is the application of engineering principles and techniques to the medical field. >>CORRECT! I’ve studied about basic theory of medical devices, electronic, medical law, and biosensor in addition to biochemistry, anatomy and physiology for understanding the human body. >>CORRECT! I realized that that knowledge would be really helpful to do my work, so I\'ve kept studying. >>I realized that these knowledge would be really helpful to do my work, so I kept studying. That\'s why I\'m good at understanding medical disease and devices. >>CORRECT! Also, my previous experiences would help me achieve good performance of KFDA approval and Quality system maintenance. >>CORRECT!

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