Bird Flu
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
This is shocking!
There\'s another issue about health again in your country.
I remember the MERS outbreak last year.
Well, just take care of yourself and you\'re right, don\'t go for chicken nowadays because it\'s dangerous.
Take care!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
There is a Bird Flu in Korea.
>> There\'s a Bird Flu outbreak in Korea now.
It makes the egg\'s price high and there is no egg in market because Bird Flu.
>> It makes the price of the eggs higher or more expensive in the market.
>> Or: Because of Bird Flu the price of the eggs higher or more expensive in the market.
Bird Flu is a bird\'s disease.And that time we rarely eat chicken.
>> Bird Flu is a kind of a bird\'s disease and this time we rarely eat chicken.
But eating chicken is not matter.We should don\'t go to the chicken.
>> But eating chicken doesn\'t matter so we should not buy or eat chicken.
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