birthday
학생이 쓴 원문
When is your birthday?
My birthday is on November 28.
What is your birthday?
My birthday is on December 25.
I am gift your birthday.
Oh, thank you
What do you want as a gift?
I want a doll.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. I like it that you\'re trying to make your own sentences. Keep it up!
Teacher Venus^^
When is your birthday?>>>CORRECT
My birthday is on November 28.>>>CORRECT
What is your birthday?
>>>What day is your birthday?My birthday is on December 25.
>>>CORRECTI am gift your birthday.>>>I have a gift for your birthday.
Oh, thank you
>>>CORRECTWhat do you want as a gift?>>>CORRECT
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