birthday party

Good evening [이름]!

Wow, I guess you really had a great time with your friends.

Also, it\'s good to know that you have good friends to share your troubles with.

Talk to you later^^

My friend\'s birthday was on November 11th.

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OR: My friend\'s birthday was November 11th.

So we had birthday party with many friends.

>>>So we had a birthday party with many friends.

First we go to the movies.

>>>First, we went to the movies.

We watched \"Frozen\".

>>>CORRECT!

It was very exciting.

>>>CORRECT!

It is one of my favorite movies.

>>>CORRECT!

When the movie ended we went to eat dinner.

>>>When the movie ended, we went to eat dinner.

OR: When the movie was over, we went to dinner.

The dishes were very delicious.

>>>CORRECT!

And we went to practice room.

>>>We went to a practice room.

There was very large.

>>>It was huge.

OR: It was spacious.

There\'s owner is my friend\'s aunt.

>>>My friend\'s aunt owns it.

So we borrowed the practice room.

>>>We stayed in the practice room.

We were dancing and talking about our trouble.

>>>We danced and talked about our troubles.

It was very wonderful day.

>>>It was a wonderful day.