Birthday present that I want to receive is tumbler.
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Birthday present that I want to receive is tumbler.
I use a STARBUCKS tumbler. I\'ve been using this tumbler since 2023.
So, I want to new tumbler because I only use this everyday.
If I receive something new, I\'ll use these two tumblers alternately.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!
If I receive something new, I\'ll use these two tumblers alternately.
Many people like to collect Starbucks tumblers.
I think it\'s because of its design, quality, and durability.
I think it\'s because of its design, quality, and durability.
Andrea
Birthday present that I want to receive is tumbler.
>> I want to receive a tumbler for my birthday.
>> I want to receive a tumble as a birthday present.
I use a STARBUCKS tumbler. I\'ve been using this tumbler since 2023.
>> I have been using a Starbucks tumbler since 2023.
So, I want to new tumbler because I only use this everyday.
>> So I want a new tumbler because I can use it every day.
If I receive something new, I\'ll use these two tumblers alternately.
>> If I receive a new one, I\'ll use these two tumblers alternately.
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