birthplace
학생이 쓴 원문
The place where I was born is a wonderful place
I can`t remember exactly because I was a kid.
There was a big beach looking at the Pacific Ocean.
Our country is surrounded by the sea on three sides.
So whenever we go we can see the sea.
Especially the east beach is more beautiful.
I remember playing with sand on the beach there.
Now I live on the west coast.
It`s not easy to see the beautiful east beach.
I miss my hometown and my childhood too.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework. You did a great job. See you in class.
Here are your corrections:
>> CORRECT
>> I can\'t exactly remember because I was a kid.
>> There is a wide beach looking at the pacific ocean.
>> CORRECT
>> So wherever we go, we can see the sea.
>> The east beach is especially beautiful.
>> I remember playing on the sand at the beach there.
>> CORRECT
>> It\'s not easy to see the beautiful eastern beach.
>> CORRECT
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