Bit by bit
학생이 쓴 원문
We are learned to be recycling about importance. Because Lots of trash are to be environment pollution. We are know these problems that are big social connect . Nothing but theory, Lots of people don\'t realize their lives influence as environment pollution .
But, I feeling bit by bit to near the problem
강사 첨삭
Hi Un! Thanks for doing your homework. Understanding the connection between our actions and the health of the planet is the first step toward real change. That\'s a great idea! I have some corrections; please check them.
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We are learned to be recycling about importance. Because Lots of trash are to be environment pollution.
REVISED: We have learned about the importance of recycling because a lot of trash causes environmental pollution.
We are know these problems that are big social connect .
REVISED: We understand that these problems are major social issues.
Nothing but theory, Lots of people don\'t realize their lives influence as environment pollution .
REVISED: However, for many people, it remains just a theory—they don’t realize how much their daily lives impact the environment.
But, I feeling bit by bit to near the problem
REVISED: But I feel that, little by little, people are becoming more aware of the problem.
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