Bithday is special day:)
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was very young, I feel birthday is so special day. Now it\'s just normal.
A few days ago it\'s my birthday, but I\'m just celebrating my birthday with only my mother.
Next day of birthday, my best friends came my home, and celebrate one more time.
It\'s very adorable and thankful.
But it was fun, but I don\'t have as much expectation for my birthday as when I was young.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Birthdays are great. It\'s a day meant to celebrate your existence in this world.
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When I was very young, I feel birthday is so special day.
>> When I was very young, I felt that birthday are so special day.
Now it\'s just normal.
>> Now, it\'s just normal.
A few days ago it\'s my birthday, but I\'m just celebrating my birthday with only my mother.
>> A few days ago, it was my birthday, but I just celebrated it with my mother.
Next day of birthday, my best friends came my home, and celebrate one more time.
>> The next day, my best friends came my home and we celebrated one more time.
It\'s very adorable and thankful.
>> It\'s very adorable and I felt thankful.
But it was fun, but I don\'t have as much expectation for my birthday as when I was young.
>> It was fun, but I don\'t have as much expectation for my birthday as when I was young.
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