BizEng-12
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The English writing skill of [이름] is expanding very fast due to assistance of teacher Naomi.
It is really heavy snow. Go to outside and move forward few steps and keep stay there about 2 minutes. And then look back, you can not find your footsteps.
Mother Teresa was a great woman. Many nuns think her as a role model and try to follow her footsteps.
Go to Milan, then you can see the cutting edge of fashion.
Wow, 100 million dollars deal, this surprising achievement was not made by one supper man, it was possible by our teamwork.
Every new elected president of South Korea says the reunification of North and South Korea is the most important goal.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Wow! What a work! You are doing great, Keep on improving your writing.^^
Thank you for sending your sentences. Again, careful in your prepostions. That\'s all for now.
See you! Have a great time!
-T.Naomi^^
The English writing skill of [이름] is expanding very fast due to assistance of teacher Naomi.
>>correctIt is really heavy snow. Go to outside and move forward few steps and keep stay there about 2 minutes. And then look back, you can not find your footsteps.
>>It is really heavy snow. Go to outside and move forward and stay there for about 2 minutes and then look back. You can not find your footsteps.>>It is really heavy snow. Go to outside and step forward then stay there for about 2 minutes and then look back. You can not find any of your footsteps.Mother Teresa was a great woman. Many nuns think her as a role model and try to follow her footsteps.
>>correctGo to Milan, then you can see the cutting edge of fashion.
>>correctWow, 100 million dollars deal, this surprising achievement was not made by one supper man, it was possible by our teamwork.
>>Wow, 100 million dollar deal, this surprising achievement was not made by one superman, it was possible by our teamwork.Every new elected president of South Korea says the reunification of North and South Korea is the most important goal.
>>correct
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