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The Ministry of Education of Korea and Philippine made an agreement regarding education knowledge exchange they hope fruitfull partnership especially at the English and Computer science part.
Apple and Walt Disney signed a MOU for strength animation business venture.
I resumed studying English last month, I'm looking forward free talking with my Australian manager next year.
I was embarrassed when the hospital requested signing a contract before sedated sleep endoscopy it saying you might not wake up.
I signed on the dotted line of the offer letter for joining this company.
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Hi [이름]!
Gush, I\'m sorry, I wasn\'t able to dissect your sentences properly. Sorry for that.
Your sentences shows you really have great and interesting ideas. It is really impressive listening to them. Guess it will be very good if sometimes have free talking. ^^
And one more thing, good job! You are using articles! Amazing! I just told you about using articles last week. ^^
See you tomorrow and have a wonderful night.
-T.Naomi^^
>>The Ministry of Education of Korea and the Philippine made an agreement regarding the educational knowledge exchange. They hope for a fruitful partnership especially at the English and Computer science part.
>>OR: The Ministry of Education of Korea and the Philippine made an agreement regarding the educational knowledge exchange. They are hoping for a fruitful partnership especially at the part of English and Computer science.
Apple and Walt Disney signed a MOU for strength animation business venture.
Apple and Walt Disney signed a MOU for strength animation business venture.
>>Apple and Walt Disney signed a MOU to strengthen business venture in animation.
>>OR: Apple and Walt Disney signed a MOU for a strong business venture in animation.
I resumed studying English last month, I\'m looking forward free talking with my Australian manager next year.
I resumed studying English last month, I\'m looking forward free talking with my Australian manager next year.
>>I resumed studying English last month, I\'m looking forward talking with my Australian manager next year.
>>OR: I resumed studying English last month, I\'m looking forward to have a free talking with my Australian manager next year.
I was embarrassed when the hospital requested signing a contract before sedated sleep endoscopy it saying you might not wake up.
I was embarrassed when the hospital requested signing a contract before sedated sleep endoscopy it saying you might not wake up.
>>I was embarrassed when the hospital requested signing a contract before sedating me to sleep to undergo endoscopy. It says you might not wake up.
>>OR: I was shocked when the hospital requested me to sign a contract before sedating me to sleep to undergo endoscopy. It says it is possible that you might not wake up.
I signed on the dotted line of the offer letter for joining this company.
I signed on the dotted line of the offer letter for joining this company.
>>I signed on the dotted line as they offer the letter to join this company.
>>OR: signed the dotted line of the open letter in joining this company.
>>OR: I signed the dotted line of the open letter to join this company.
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