Black sheep

2021-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

Haha... It is me, You mean me. I didn\'t study when I was a student. My parents said \"Go study\", but it\'s not important for me. I was first fun which played table tennis, but I think I am living well now,,,,,. Black sheep of the family is not independent from their parents even when they are adult. I think that\'s most important to be independent of your parents when you become an adult. I am sad if I think my youngest brother because I really hope he find his partner. I don\'t think that he\'s black sheep because marriage is just everyone\'s choice. He\'s not a non-marriageist.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Ms. [Name]! Hahaha.. I was not referring to you ma\'am about the topic, Good thing is you understand the meaning of black sheep. I think everyone has their own way of being a black sheep. It just depends on its seriousness. Have a happy day :)
Aki ~
Haha... It is me, You mean me.
>>> Hahaha.. That is me. You mean me.
>>> I guess you are referring to me.
I didn\'t study when I was a student.
>>>  I didn\'t study well when I was a student.
My parents said \"Go study\", but it\'s not important for me.
>>>  My parents asked me to go and study but that is not important for me.
>>> My parents told me tp go and study but it doe not matter to  me.
I was first fun which played table tennis, but I think I am living well now,,,,,.
>>>  I had fun the first time I played tennis and I think I am living well now.
Black sheep of the family is not independent from their parents even when they are adult
>>>  CORRECT!
OR >>> Black sheep of the family is still dependent from their parents even when they are already adults.
I think that\'s most important to be independent of your parents when you become an adult.\\
>>> I think is is the most important thing to do when you become an adult is to become independent from your parents.
I am sad if I think my youngest brother because I really hope he find his partner.
>>>  I feel sad whenever I think of my youngest brother because he hasn\'t found his partner yet.
I don\'t think that he\'s black sheep because marriage is just everyone\'s choice.
>>>  CORRECT!
OR >>> I don\'t consider him a black sheep because being single is everyone\'s preference.
He\'s not a non-marriageist.
>>>  CORRECT!
OR >>> He is not against marriages.
 

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