BLIND, MUTE, OR DEAF
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Hi there, [이름]!
Thanks for doing your homework.
It\'s hard to choose, right?
I wouldn\'t want to be blind too. I don\'t want to live in darkness.
For me, it\'s a toss between deaf or mute.
If I really must choose, then I\'d be mute too.
I cannot be deaf because I LOVE listening to music. Haha.
Check my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
I don\'t want all of them but if I had to choose one, it would be mute.
>> CORRECT!
If I could not see anything, it would be a tough challenge and take a lot of time to be accustomed to the new situation.
>> If I could not see anything, it would be a tough challenge because it will take a lot of time for me to get accustomed to my surroundings.
In that case, I have two choices, mute or deaf.
>> CORRECT!
If I was deaf, I could hardly speak because I cannot hear voices.
>> CORRECT!
Not only that, it is very hard to cope with various kinds of accidents.
>> Not only that, it would also be very hard to cope with various kinds of incidents.
So mute is a better choice.
>> CORRECT!
I would learn body language, lip reading, and sign language to handle this discomfort.
>> I would learn body language, lip reading, and sign language to handle this disability.
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