BLIND, MUTE, OR DEAF

2017-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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You wake up one day and you are suddenly either blind, mute, or deaf. Which one would it be and why? I don't want all of them but if I had to choose one, it would be mute. If I could not see anything, it would be a tough challenge and take a lot of time to be accustomed to the new situation. In that case, I have two choices, mute or deaf. If I was deaf, I could hardly speak because I cannot hear voices. Not only that, it is very hard to cope with various kinds of accidents. So mute is a better choice. I would learn body language, lip reading, and sign language to handle this discomfort.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!

Thanks for doing your homework.

It\'s hard to choose, right?

I wouldn\'t want to be blind too. I don\'t want to live in darkness.

For me, it\'s a toss between deaf or mute.

If I really must choose, then I\'d be mute too.

I cannot be deaf because I LOVE listening to music. Haha.

Check my corrections here.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~ ^^

I don\'t want all of them but if I had to choose one, it would be mute.

>> CORRECT!

If I could not see anything, it would be a tough challenge and take a lot of time to be accustomed to the new situation.

>> If I could not see anything, it would be a tough challenge because it will take a lot of time for me to get accustomed to my surroundings.

In that case, I have two choices, mute or deaf.

>> CORRECT!

If I was deaf, I could hardly speak because I cannot hear voices.

>> CORRECT!

Not only that, it is very hard to cope with various kinds of accidents.

>> Not only that, it would also be very hard to cope with various kinds of incidents.

So mute is a better choice.

>> CORRECT!

I would learn body language, lip reading, and sign language to handle this discomfort.

>> I would learn body language, lip reading, and sign language to handle this disability.

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