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2012-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Let me talk about my blog, I collected news and photos about my favorite celebrity, Leighton Meester. She acts in Gossip girl as a Blair. As you know, I love to watch dramas. Even the reason I want to learn English is watching English drama without subtitle. (the reason I have to learn English now is survival in the Czech republic.) Aside dramas, I'm also interested in independent musician, cat, Disney animation. But I didn't write those things yet. Lastly, I uploaded my homework and recorded answer of questions in my blog. There are many mistakes. But someday when it may be two years later, If I see my short English writings include mistakes, I'll feel nostalgia and happy. It is supposition that I use English fluently in the future. But I have big problem. Just as I suspected, I'm sick of blog.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Isabel! Thank you for sharing me this composition. Good job! Believe in yourself my dear. I can see that you really want to learn English and I believe that you will be very good in English someday. Anyway, I will talk to you later my dear. Hugs and kisses. -Teacher Chloe  Let me talk about my blog, I collected news and photos about my favorite celebrity, Leighton Meester. >>Let me tell you something about my blogs. I collected news and photos about my favorite celebrity Leighton Meester. She acts in Gossip girl as a Blair. As you know, I love to watch dramas. >>She acted in Gossip girls as Blair. As what you know, I love watching dramas. Even the reason I want to learn English is watching English drama without subtitle. >>I am watching English dramas even without subtitles. (the reason I have to learn English now is survival in the Czech republic.) >>I am studying English so that I can survive in Czech Republic in speaking English. Aside dramas, I\'m also interested in independent musician, cat, Disney animation. >>Aside from watching dramas, I am also interested in watching musical plays and Walt Disney\'s animation films. But I didn\'t write those things yet. >>But I have not written about it yet.Lastly, I uploaded my homework and recorded answer of questions in my blog. >>Anyway, I already uploaded my homework in my blog already. There are many mistakes. >>There are some mistakes. But someday when it may be two years later, If I see my short English writings include mistakes, I\'ll feel nostalgia and happy. It is supposition that I use English fluently in the future.>>But I believe that someday I will be very good and very fluent in English. But I have big problem. Just as I suspected, I\'m sick of blog. >>But my problem is, I am sick in blogs right now.

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