Blue whale
학생이 쓴 원문
Blue whale
강사 첨삭
The dream in your short story sounds awesome, Andrew! O(∩_∩)O I\'m jealous of the fact that the character in your story got to experience it hehe. ^^ You were able to explain the emotion you felt from the dream, which was a nice touch. Thank you! :D
~T.Harmony <3
>> I dreamt about a blue whale.
I was on the blue whale.
>> CORRECT!
The blue whale surge to the sky.
>> The blue whale surged to sky.
It was very fun.
>> CORRECT!
I got up when it is time to go school.
>> I got up when it was time to go to school.
OR>> I woke up when it was time for me to go to school.
That dream was very fun!
>> CORRECT!
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