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학생이 쓴 원문
\'Body-Shaming\'is a symbol of low level culture wherever it is.
We need to keep a healthy diet for our life not for showing to others.
It is stupid to live to pretend to others.
강사 첨삭
Great day, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for making the correct sentences. I agree that we should not be living a life for others. We need to live a life for us to inspire others and not impose our beliefs and practices. I like reading your views on different topics. keep going!
Aki!
\'Body-Shaming\'is a symbol of low-level culture wherever it is.
>>> CORRECT!
We need to keep a healthy diet for our life not for showing to others.
>>> CORRECT!
It is stupid to live to pretend to others.
>>> CORRECT!
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