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Hello Gabby!
Did you have a nice today? I just called to say hello to my sister.
I sometimes miss my siblings a lot. Is it due to the weather?
The weather is not bad and not fine here these days.
I had a look round the bookcase to come in sight \"The Diary of a young Girl Anne Frank\".
Maybe I read it again the latest. The human is really great.
We have hard these days for corona virus.
But we di moving, alouding and eatting well.
We are happy if it compare with that times. The book is famous. Of course you read it.
I can\'t explain it.
I suggest to you, Gabby.
let\'s share about it in each [이름]d. Isn\'t it okay?
You know too I am not speaking English well. Just I arrange the words only.
It do with the English dictionary. I am very hard.
See you on Tuesday in the morning. Gabby!
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Awesome work! - T. Gabby.
Hello Gabby!
>> Correct.
Did you have a nice today? I just called to say hello to my sister.
Did you have a nice today? I just called to say hello to my sister.
>> Correct.
I sometimes miss my siblings a lot.
I sometimes miss my siblings a lot.
>> Correct.
Is it due to the weather?
>> Correct.
The weather is not bad and not fine here these days.
The weather is not bad and not fine here these days.
>> Correct.
I had a look round the bookcase to come in sight \"The Diary of a young Girl Anne Frank\".
I had a look round the bookcase to come in sight \"The Diary of a young Girl Anne Frank\".
>> I checked my bookcase and see the \"The Diary of a young Girl Anne Frank\".
Maybe I read it again the latest. The human is really great.
Maybe I read it again the latest. The human is really great.
>> Maybe I read it again last time. Humans are really great.
We have hard these days for corona virus.
We have hard these days for corona virus.
>> We have difficult days due to corona virus.
But we di moving, alouding and eatting well.
But we di moving, alouding and eatting well.
>> But we are still moving and eating well.
We are happy if it compare with that times.
We are happy if it compare with that times.
>> We are happier compare to that time.
The book is famous. Of course you read it.
>> That book is famous. I\'m sure you\'ve read it.
I can\'t explain it.
I can\'t explain it.
>> Correct.
I suggest to you, Gabby.
I suggest to you, Gabby.
>> I suggest you do so, Gabby.
Let\'s share about it in each [이름]d. Isn\'t it okay?
Let\'s share about it in each [이름]d. Isn\'t it okay?
>> Let\'s talk about our thoughts, is it okay?
You know too I am not speaking English well.
You know too I am not speaking English well.
>> As you know, I can\'t speak English well.
Just I arrange the words only.
>> I just arrange the words.
It do with the English dictionary.
It do with the English dictionary.
>> I do it my English dictionary.
I am very hard.
>> It\'s very hard.
See you on Tuesday in the morning. Gabby!
>> It\'s very hard.
See you on Tuesday in the morning. Gabby!
>> See you on Tuesday morning, Gabby!
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