book
학생이 쓴 원문
The reason that i have to read book is i can learn life experience.
People who wrote book had experienced a lot.
So,when we read book,we can learn their knowledge.
강사 첨삭
Hello, David! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
The reason that i have to read book is i can learn life experience.
>>> The reason that I have to read books is that I can learn from life experiences.
People who wrote book had experienced a lot.
>>> People who wrote books had a lot of experience.
So,when we read book,we can learn their knowledge.
>>> So, when we read books, we can learn their knowledge.
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