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2010-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Today I read a book hardly. Because I borrowed the book at the library and I must have return it by yesterday. The book very interesting. It's on psychology. I like psychology book but a little difficult. So taking so long in read completely. Usually I bought book and read. Recently in my neighborhood the library has open. Tomorrow I will go to the library.

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Hello Lindsay! Thank you for your message. Your sentences are improving. You only lack some articles (the, a and an) and prepositions. So always remember to use them ok? Wow. We share the same hobby뾋뭢 a bookworm too! I love to read! I read books, magazines and internet articles. It뭩 a great way to learn and improve yourself. If you  are a wide-reader you become knowledgeable about lots of things. So I hope you continue to read lots of books and don뭪 limit yourself to just one topic. Try to read as much as you can. Enjoy the weekend! CIAO!

= T. Marie =

book

>> correct

Today I read a book hardly.

>> Today I read a book diligently.
Because I borrowed the book at the library and I must have return it by yesterday.

>> I borrowed the book from the library and I have to return it by today.
The book very interesting.

>> The book was very interesting.

It's on psychology.

>> It뭩 about Psychology.
I like psychology book but a little difficult.

>> I like psychology books but it뭩 a little bit difficult.
So taking so long in read completely.

>> So I took so long in reading the whole book.
Usually I bought book and read.

>> I usually buy books and read them.
Recently in my neighborhood the library has open.

>> A library was opened in my neighborhood recently.
Tomorrow I will go to the library.

>> correct

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