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2010-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm interested in a autography, because it can help to make a direction in my life by learning from succeed people. And, as I read these book, I get indirect experiences. I think,one of memory about that is, all of them do thier best in their field. After all, they got a great result. I want to do that like them, and if I can, I want to make more great success in my field. Whenever I read a autography, I could learn many things, I also make up my mind to have a nice dream. So I like a autography.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Wow! That really is interesting.  Learning from other people's mistakes and successes.  Oh by the way you can also call it "Inspirational Book".  You're right experience is the best teacher.  Monica I'm interested in a autography, because it can help to make a direction in my life by learning from succeed people. >>>>I'm interested in autobiography because it can help me change the direction of my life through the lessons from successful people. And, as I read these book, I get indirect experiences. I think,one of memory about that is, all of them do thier best in their field. >>>>As I read these books, I get to know about their experiences.  I think,  one thing I remember about these books is all of them excel in their own chosen field. After all, they got a great result. I want to do that like them, and if I can, I want to make more great success in my field. >>>After all,  they got great results.  I want to be like them(I also want to do what they did)  and if I can,  I want to be successful in my own field as well. Whenever I read a autography, I could learn many things, I also make up my mind to have a nice dream. So I like a autography. >>>>Whenever I read an autobiography,  I learn many things.  I also build great dreams in my mind.  That's why I like autobiography.

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