BOOK
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강사 첨삭
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3. Since this book is not boring, I lose track of time while I\'m reading.
>> Since this book is not boring, I lost track of time while I was reading it.
Like some people it is hard for me to read really compact and long sentences.
>> Like some people, it is hard for me to read really compact and long sentences.
Also, this book doesn\'t have particular story but the background is almost 40 years ago, so I can show that time lives.
>> Also, this book doesn\'t have a particular story but the background is almost 40 years ago, so I can show that time lives.
4. Reading books have many advantages.
>> Correct.
For one, we can expand our mind and knowledge.
>> For one, we can expand our mind and our knowledge.
Therefore, when we think about various issues we would consider diverse views.
>> Therefore, when we think about various issues, we would consider diverse views.
Also, we can feel empathy on author\'s thinking.
>> Also, we can feel empathy for the author\'s opinion.
It helps to choose the best decision because we think widely.
>> Correct.
5. Reading shows the things very detail.
>> Reading shows things in a very detailed manner.
However, the computer age shows simple like pictures.
>> However, the computer age shows simple pictures.
What I mean by that is by looking the pictures, we can accept different means.
>> What I mean by that is that, by looking tat he pictures, we can accept different things.
Both of them inform something new to us.
>> Both of them gives us something new to ponder.
6. In my age, almost romance novels are popular.
>> Correct.
There are many romance novels but I read one book.
>> There are many romance novels but I only read one book.
The book cover design attracts people even drawing in the book is more pretty.
>> The book cover design attracts people, even the drawings in books are prettier.
So, I think this kind of book is most famous in my age.
>> So, I think this kind of book is the most famous book now.
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