Book report 1

2011-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

학생이 쓴 원문

I had watched that movie to understand Audit one years ago. I didn’t get a point what movie tell me. Because I had never experienced the work related to audit. But, I have got a point the movie what teaching me. In my opinion, I could get a knowledge about Audting area throught lecture in my university. The movie was starting what Audit is and how can Auditor work in. I could felt what’s the meaning of that compared with before [Company]. which business supermarket had auidt by a accounting firm that are discover mararial misstatement in financial statement and fraud.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]! Wow! It's good that you wrote on our composition to explain what you mean. You can also use simple words. It's like you are having a difficult time explaining it.   Here are some of the corrections to your composition: I had watched that movie to understand Audit one years ago. >>I watched a movie about Audit one year ago. >>A year ago, I watched a movie about Auditing to understand it. I didn’t get a point what movie tell me. >>I didn't get the point of the movie. Because I had never experienced the work related to audit. >>Because I have never experienced working in that field.But, I have got a point the movie what teaching me.>>But, I got a little idea what the movie was teaching me. In my opinion, I could get a knowledge about Audting area throught lecture in my university.>>In my opinion, I could gain knowledge about Auditing through lectures in the University.The movie was starting what Audit is and how can Auditor work in.>>The movie was about Audit and how it works. I could felt what’s the meaning of that compared with before >>I fell the meaning of that now compared with what I understand of it before.[Company]. which business supermarket had auidt by a accounting firm that are discover mararial misstatement in financial statement and fraud. >>[Company]. which is a business supermarket had audit by an accounting firm that discovered material misstatement (you can also use fabrication ?this is a synonym of misstatement) in financial statement and fraud.

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