Book report 1
학생이 쓴 원문
I had watched that movie to understand Audit one years ago.
I didn’t get a point what movie tell me. Because I had never experienced the work related to audit.
But, I have got a point the movie what teaching me.
In my opinion, I could get a knowledge about Audting area throught lecture in my university.
The movie was starting what Audit is and how can Auditor work in.
I could felt what’s the meaning of that compared with before
[Company]. which business supermarket had auidt by a accounting firm that are discover mararial misstatement in financial statement and fraud.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
Wow! It's good that you wrote on our composition to explain what you mean. You can also use simple words. It's like you are having a difficult time explaining it.
Here are some of the corrections to your composition:
I had watched that movie to understand Audit one years ago.
>>I watched a movie about Audit one year ago.
>>A year ago, I watched a movie about Auditing to understand it. I didn’t get a point what movie tell me.
>>I didn't get the point of the movie.
Because I had never experienced the work related to audit.
>>Because I have never experienced working in that field.But, I have got a point the movie what teaching me.>>But, I got a little idea what the movie was teaching me.
In my opinion, I could get a knowledge about Audting area throught lecture in my university.>>In my opinion, I could gain knowledge about Auditing through lectures in the University.The movie was starting what Audit is and how can Auditor work in.>>The movie was about Audit and how it works.
I could felt what’s the meaning of that compared with before
>>I fell the meaning of that now compared with what I understand of it before.[Company]. which business supermarket had auidt by a accounting firm that are discover mararial misstatement in financial statement and fraud.
>>[Company]. which is a business supermarket had audit by an accounting firm that discovered material misstatement (you can also use fabrication ?this is a synonym of misstatement) in financial statement and fraud.
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