Book report
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<Anne of green gables>
Anne is not real daughter, Marilla and Matthew adopt Anne from orphanage.
But they didn't want Anne at first meeting.
Because they want a boy.
The orphanage made a mistake (so Anne is in Marilla's home.)
When time passed, Anne fight with Gilbert.
They didn't talk anymore.
However Anne was eat wrong medicine.
So Anne's red hair become green.
But time passed it became red.
And Anne is good at studying so she wants to be a teacher.
Then Anne's stepfather is die.
Anne wasn't give up.
So Anne become teacher and forgive Gilbert.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thanks for dropping by. This is a great story! I used to read this when I was young. Please review my corrections here. Have a great evening. CIAO!
~Teacher Marie~
<Anne of green gables>
>> CORRECT
OR >> Anne of Green Gables.
*Remember to capitalize the proper nouns.Anne is not real daughter, Marilla and Matthew adopt Anne from orphanage.
>> Marilla and Matthew adopted Anne from the orphanage so she is not their real daughter.But they didn\'t want Anne at first meeting.
>> CORRECT
OR >> But they didn\'t want Anne at first.
Because they want a boy.
>> Because they wanted a boy.
The orphanage made a mistake (so Anne is in Marilla\'s home.)
>> CORRECT When time passed, Anne fight with Gilbert.
>> As time passed, Anne kept on fighting with Gilbert.They didn\'t talk anymore.
>> CORRECT
OR >> They stopped talking to each other.
However Anne was eat wrong medicine.
>> However, Anne took the wrong medicine.So Anne\'s red hair become green.
>> So Anne\'s red hair turned green.But time passed it became red.
>> But as time passed it became red. And Anne is good at studying so she wants to be a teacher.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Anne is good at studying so she wanted to be a teacher.
Then Anne\'s stepfather is die.
>> Then Anne\'s stepfather died. Anne wasn\'t give up.
>> Anne didn\'t give up.So Anne become teacher and forgive Gilbert.
>> So Anne became a teacher and she forgave Gilbert.
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