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< The emperor's new clothes.> Emperor likes new clothes and best clothes. One day, two thieves said that they can make magic cloth. The emperor heard that. So he called two thieves and please to make magic cloth. but two thieves said that they need a lot of money. So emperor gave them a lot of money. Two thieves said "The wise man can see this cloth." Emperor was to curious about magic cloth. So his adviser goes to two thieves but there's nothing. But adviser doesn't want to be foolish man. So he said to emperor, the cloth was very good. Then the emperor wear the colth and he shocked. Because he can't see anything. Then the girl said that emperor doesn't wear anything. So the king know he is not wise emperor.

Hi [이름]! This is a wonderful story. I think I read about this before. ^^ Please review the corrections here. Take care! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ < The emperor\'s new clothes.> >> CORRECTEmperor likes new clothes and best clothes. >> The Emperor likes new clothes and best clothes.One day, two thieves said that they can make magic cloth. >> One day, two thieves were talking about how they can make a magic cloth.The emperor heard that. >> CORRECTSo he called two thieves and please to make magic cloth. >> So he called the two thieves and asked them to make one for him.but two thieves said that they need a lot of money. >> CORRECT OR >> But the two thieves said that they need a lot of money. So emperor gave them a lot of money. >> CORRECT OR >> So the emperor gave them a lot of money.Two thieves said \"The wise man can see this cloth.\" >> CORRECT OR >> The two thieves said \"Only a wise man can see this cloth.\"Emperor was to curious about magic cloth. >> The emperor was very curious about the magic cloth.So his adviser goes to two thieves but there\'s nothing. >> So his adviser went to see the two thieves but they had nothing.But adviser doesn\'t want to be foolish man. >> But the adviser didn\'t want to be a foolish man.So he said to emperor, the cloth was very good. >> So he told the Emperor that the cloth was very good.Then the emperor wear the colth and he shocked. >> The Emperor wore the cloth and he was shocked.Because he can\'t see anything. >> CORRECT Then the girl said that emperor doesn\'t wear anything. >> Then one girl told the Emperor that he was not wearing anything. So the king know he is not wise emperor. >> So the Emperor found out that he is not a wise man.