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<The merchant of Venice> There lived two moneylender named Shylock and Antonio. They hate each other. But people in Venice liked Antonio and they hate Shylock. Because Shylock is jewish and greedy but Antonio is kind and Christian. One day, Antonio's best friend Bassanio fell in love with portia. She is rich and kind. but Bassanio has no money to give present for portia. So Bassanio wants borrow money to Antonio but Antonio's money is in boat. So they borrow to Shylock. But Antonio's boat, sink. so they can't give money to Shylock. In contract Shylock want pound of flesh if Antonio don't give the money. So Antonio have to die. But Bassanios' wife, portia is very clever. Portia disguise to Balthasar. Portia is very clever so she slove that problem. So Antonio didn't die.

Hi [이름]! This is another wonderful book report from you. Thanks for sharing it. I made some corrections, please review them. Remember proper capitalization and punctuation next time okay? Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ <The merchant of Venice> >> CORRECTThere lived two moneylender named Shylock and Antonio. >> CORRECT Or >> Once there lived two moneylenders named Shylock and Antonio.They hate each other. >> CORRECT But people in Venice liked Antonio and they hate Shylock. >> CORRECTBecause Shylock is jewish and greedy but Antonio is kind and Christian. >> CORRECT OR >> Because Shylock is a greedy Jewish while Antonio is a kind Christian.One day, Antonio\'s best friend Bassanio fell in love with portia. >> CORRECT Or >> One day, Antonio\'s best friend Bassanio fell in love with a girl named Portia.She is rich and kind. >> CORRECTbut Bassanio has no money to give present for portia. >> However, Bassanio has no money to give Portia as a present.So Bassanio wants borrow money to Antonio but Antonio\'s money is in boat. >> So Bassanio wants to borrow money from Antonio but his money is still in the boat.So they borrow to Shylock. >> So they borrowed money from Shylock.But Antonio\'s boat, sink. >> Unfortunately, Antonio\'s boat sank. so they can\'t give money to Shylock. >> So they cannot pay Shylock\'s money back.In contract Shylock want pound of flesh if Antonio don\'t give the money. >> In the contract, Shylock wants a pound of flesh if Antonio couldn\'t pay the money.So Antonio have to die. >> So Antonio has to die.But Bassanios\' wife, portia is very clever. >> Bassanio\'s wife, Portia, is very clever.Portia disguise to Balthasar. >> Portia disguised herself as Balthasar.Portia is very clever so she slove that problem. >> Portia was very clever so she was able to solve the problem.So Antonio didn\'t die. >> CORRECT OR >> In the end, Antonio didn\'t die.