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Today I had read two books.
>>Correct^^
I had read \'Junie B. Jones First grade (at last)\' and
\'Horrible Harry and the dungeon.\'
>>Correct^^
Junie B. Jones and Lucille were best freinds in
kindergarden but now Lucille dosen\'t want to be best friends because, she want to be best friends with Camille and Chenile.
>>Junie B. Jones and Lucille were best friends in
kindergarten but now Lucille doesn\'t want to be best friends because, she want to be best friends with Camille and Chenile.
Since Lucille,Camille and Chenille ry-mes she wants to be best friends.
>>Since Lucille,Camille and Chenille rhymes, she wants to be best friends.
In Horrible Harry I had read olny 26 pages so I don\'t no why the title is Horrible Harry and the Dungeon.
>> In Horrible Harry I had read only 26 pages so I don\'t know why the title is Horrible Harry and the Dungeon.
I hope the book will be fun.
>>Correct^^
In Junie B. Jones I had read olny 14 pages.
>>In Junie B. Jones I had read only 14 pages.
The author of Junie B. Jones is
Barbara Park.
illustrated by Denise Brunkus.
>Illustrated by Denise Brunkus.
The author of Horrible Harry is Suzy
Kline.
>>Correct^^
illustrated by Frank Remkiewicz.
>>Illustrated by Frank Remkiewicz.
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