Books are better than movies.

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I agree that books are better than movies.

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I think that books are better than movie.

>> I think that books are better than movies.
This is because both have their own ideas and meanings but books are more obvious.

>> Correct
Also, some movies haven’t meanings, these are just for fun.

>> There are also movies made only for fun without any relevance.
So, books have more information and meanings.

>> On the other hand, books convey more information and meaning.
And there is a person who proofread books before they are published.

>> There is also a person who proofreads books before they are published.
In conclusion, I think books are better than movies.

>> Correct