Books are now being produced in electronic format which can be read on a PC, an e-reader, a tablet,

2022-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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E-books are published and produced a lot due to the convinence. It is easy to purchase, read and carry. Although, it has a lot of advantages, there are few cons. Some people get eye strain from e-books because it is usually a small device which has bright screen. In addition, it\'s quite difficult to focus on the stories. I always read same story again and again because of the small letter and the light. However, some people prefer to buy E-books because it is cheper than paper books and it doesn\'t need to store in the book shelf. People can access their E-books regradless of time and place. I used to read E-books but I prefer to read a book with paper recently. I think both have pros and cons but the most important thing is having a habit to read books. It helps people to improve their skill anyway.

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Good day, Sir [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

E-books are published and produced a lot due to the convinence. 
>> CORRECT!
It is easy to purchase, read and carry. 
>> CORRECT!
Although, it has a lot of advantages, there are few cons. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Although, it has a lot of advantages, there are few disadvantages. 
Some people get eye strain from e-books because it is usually a small device which has bright screen. 
>> Some people get eye strain from e-books because it is usually a small device which has a bright screen. 
In addition, it\'s quite difficult to focus on the stories. 
>> CORRECT!
I always read same story again and again because of the small letter and the light.
>> CORRECT!
However, some people prefer to buy E-books because it is cheper than paper books and it doesn\'t need to store in the book shelf. 
 >> However, some people prefer to buy E-books because it is cheaper than paper books and it doesn\'t need to store in the book shelf.
OR >> However, some people prefer to buy E-books because it is cheaper than hard-bound books and it doesn\'t need to store in the book shelf.
People can access their E-books regradless of time and place. 
>> CORRECT!
I used to read E-books but I prefer to read a book with paper recently. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I used to read E-books but I prefer to read a hard-bound book recently. 
I think both have pros and cons but the most important thing is having a habit to read books. 
>> CORRECT!
It helps people to improve their skill anyway.
>> CORRECT!

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