Books vs Movies
학생이 쓴 원문
Both of them have their own pros and cons and we have to consider those things whenever we choose one thing. I think the biggest difference is imagination. We can imagine and draw pictures in our head while we are reading a book and it gives a lot of positive influence such as creativity. Also, we can get plenty of information by reading books because it has been written for ages. However, I think for the extent we can understand about story, movies is better than books. It is made by director and we can see a real scene, so it is really easy to understand and know what is going on. In addition, we don\'t have to put a lot of effort to get the story, just watching it. But, we have to know that because movies are made by director, so there must be intention of director and we have to be careful when we embrace the fact from the film.
강사 첨삭
1. Both of them have their own pros and cons and we have to consider those things whenever we choose one thing.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Both have their own pros and cons and we have to think about those things whenever we choose one thing.
2. I think the biggest difference is imagination.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I believe the biggest difference is imagination.
3. We can imagine and draw pictures in our head while we are reading a book and it gives a lot of positive influence such as creativity.
>>We can imagine and draw pictures in our head while we are reading a book and it gives a lot of positive influences such as creativity.
4. Also, we can get plenty of information by reading books because it has been written for ages.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Also, we can get plenty of information by reading books because it has been written for quite some time.
5. However, I think for the extent we can understand about story, movies is better than books.
>>However, I think for an extent, so we can understand the story, movies are better than books.
6. It is made by director and we can see a real scene, so it is really easy to understand and know what is going on.
>>It is made by a director and we can see a real scene, so it is really easy to understand and know what is going on.
7. In addition, we don\'t have to put a lot of effort to get the story, just watching it.
>>CORRECT
OR>>In addition, we don\'t have to put a lot of effort to understand the story, we just need to watch it.
8. But, we have to know that because movies are made by director, so there must be intention of director and we have to be careful when we embrace the fact from the film.
>>But, we have to know that because movies are made by directors, so there must be an intention of the director and we have to be careful when we embrace the fact from the film.
Very good.
- T. Melody ^^
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