Bored
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Theme: [Writing Task] Why do we get bored?
Because my class is so easy.
My English class is too~ easy.
I am having free-talking class with my teather!
But in class, we learn potato, carrot... : (
It is so easy!
So we are bored.
강사 첨삭
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Because my class is so easy.
>>> I get bored when the lesson\'s so easy.
My English class is too~ easy.
>>> CORRECT
>>> My English class is quite easy.
I am having free-talking class with my teather!
>>> I have free talking with my class teacher.
But in class, we learn potato, carrot... : (
>>> However, we only talk about potato, carrot, etc.
It is so easy!
>>> CORRECT
So we are bored.>>> Thus, I get bored.
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