Boring Christmas Day
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It was almost worst Christmas Day.
>> It was like the worst Christmas day.
I didn\'t enjoy Christmas.
>> I didn\'t enjoy it.
I was really sleepy and angry on Christmas Day, We have a dawnsong ceremony.
>> we had dawn song ceremony.
It\'s a christmas church ceremony.It was fun but it\'s too cold and sleepy.
>> It\'s a Christmas church ceremony. It was fun but it\'s too cold and I was very sleepy.
And because of sleepy mood I can\'t concentrate on movie and slept for 1hours.
>> And because I was very sleepy, I couldn\'t concentrate on the movie and slept for 1 hour.
My parents wanted to have a nice dinner but we just ate dinner at home and ate chicken.
>> Correct
It\'s really worst Christmas.I hope new year day is different.
>> It\'s really the worst Christmas. I hope New Year will be different.
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