Boring new year day
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강사 첨삭
It was boring,too. I just stayed at home on special day.These day I feel good and sad. I usually go my church on New year\'day but I didn\'t go. Only I did on new year\'s day I had tteokguk.
>> It was boring too. I just stayed at home on special days. These days, I feel good and sad. I usually go to church on New Year\'s day but I didn\'t. The only thing I did on New Year\'s day was to have tteokguk.
It tastes not bad. 2019 is golden pig\'s year. I want to have a wonderful things in this year.
>> It didn\'t taste that bad. 2019 is Golden Pig\'s year. I want to9 have wonderful things this year.
My new year\'s resolution is this. 1.Grow at least 10cm 2.Study math and science hard and get a good score. 3.Read 50books. 4.Write down the baseball report for 30times. 5.Buy a new backpack and new padded jacket.
>> My New year\'s resolutions are these; 1. Grow at least 10cm. 2. Study Math and Science hard and get good scores. 3. Read 50 books. 4. Write down a baseball report 30 times. 5. Buy a new backpack and padded jacket.
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