Boring vacation
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강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I think that\'s really boring.
Maybe you can arrange some meeting with your friends.
You should enjoy your vacation.
Think of other ways on how to make your vacation worthwhile.
_Teacher Dianne ^^
The winter vacation past for 2weeks.But,I don\'t did many thigns.
>> Two weeks had passed in my winter vacation, but I didn\'t do many things.
Sleep and eat sleep and eat and go to academy is all.And always same day.
>> I only slept and ate meals and went to my academy. My day was always the same.
>> or: I only slept and ate meals and went to my academy. My day routine always the same.
Go to afterschool english class or math class and sleep and eat is routine to my daily life.
>> Going to my English or Math after school class and then sleeping and eating were my daily routine.
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