Boryeong Mud Festival

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~~Teacher Erine~~

Boryeong Mud Festival is one of the most popular foreign festival.

>> Boryeong Mud Festival is one of the most popular foreign festivals.

Because mud is good for skin it is so famous festival in Korea.

>> Because mud is good for the skin, it is a very famous festival in Korea.

Many foreigner comes to Korea to experience Boryeong Mud Festival.

>> Many foreigners come to Korea to experience Boryeong Mud Festival.

For example at last year 270.000 foreigners came to Korea to experience Mud Festival.

>> For example, last year, 270,000 foreigners came to Korea to experience Mud Festival.

This festival is held every year since 1998.

>> Correct

It last for 10 days.

>> It lasts for 10 days.

In Boryeong Mud Festival we can do many experience such as mud slide, mud flat game, and mud kids land.

>> In Boryeong Mud Festival, we can do many activities such as mud slide, mud flat game, and mud kids land.

This Festival is held on the beach.

>> Correct

If we go to festival we can play on the beach too.

>> If we go to the festival, we can play on the beach, too.

I went to that beach when Festival was finished.

>> Correct

So I want to go there again.

>> Correct