bossam and gyockbal taste good.

2014-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

In midnight, there are food which I think up. Whenever I want to eat these things. Maybe everyone like these, Bossam and Gyockbal. these are made of folk. Bossam is food that eat with kimch or salad. It is cooked by hot steam. so It is not baked food and very soft. Gyockbal is came from legs of pig. I don't know how to make it. but the onething is certain, it is very delicious. It's color is brown and taste like little salty or sweety depend on the recipe of restaurant. In this moment, I want to eat it. The more I think, the more I want to eat. It seems like a drug. I think pig is the present of God.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

I think everyone really wants to eat Bossam and Gyockbal.

I hope you will be able to learn how to prepare these kinds of food.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful composition with me!^^

See you in class! Take care always.

_T. Nina^^


In midnight, there are food which I think up.

>> Every midnight, I think about food.
Whenever I want to eat these things.

>> I want to eat these kinds of food every time.
Maybe everyone like these, Bossam and Gyockbal.

>> I think everyone likes Bossam and Gyockbal.
these are made of folk.

>> These are prepared by folks.
Bossam is food t
hat eat with kimch or salad.

>> Bossam is a dish that we used to eat with Kimchi and Salad.
It is cooked by hot steam. so It is not baked food and very soft.

>> It is a hot steamed pork, not baked and is very soft.
Gyockbal is came from legs of pig.

>> Gyockbal is made of legs of pig.
I don\'t know how to make it.

>> Correct!

>> OR: I don\'t know how to prepare it.
but the onething is certain, it is very delicious.

>> But one thing I know is that it is very delicious.
It\'s color is brown and taste like little salty or sweety depend on the recipe of restaurant.

>> The color is brown and the taste is either salty or sweet. It depends on the recipe of the restaurant.
In this moment, I want to eat it.

>> At this moment, I want to eat it.
The more I think, the more I want to eat.

>> The more I think of it, the more I want to eat it.
It seems like a drug.
>> It is like a drug.
I think pig is the present of God.

>> Correct

>> OR: I think pig is a gift from God.

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