bossam and gyockbal taste good.
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Hi there [이름]!
I think everyone really wants to eat Bossam and Gyockbal.
I hope you will be able to learn how to prepare these kinds of food.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful composition with me!^^
See you in class! Take care always.
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In midnight, there are food which I think up.
>> Every midnight, I think about food.
Whenever I want to eat these things.
>> I want to eat these kinds of food every time.
Maybe everyone like these, Bossam and Gyockbal.
>> I think everyone likes Bossam and Gyockbal.
these are made of folk.
>> These are prepared by folks.
Bossam is food that eat with kimch or salad.
>> Bossam is a dish that we used to eat with Kimchi and Salad.
It is cooked by hot steam. so It is not baked food and very soft.
>> It is a hot steamed pork, not baked and is very soft.
Gyockbal is came from legs of pig.
>> Gyockbal is made of legs of pig.
I don\'t know how to make it.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I don\'t know how to prepare it.
but the onething is certain, it is very delicious.
>> But one thing I know is that it is very delicious.
It\'s color is brown and taste like little salty or sweety depend on the recipe of restaurant.
>> The color is brown and the taste is either salty or sweet. It depends on the recipe of the restaurant.
In this moment, I want to eat it.
>> At this moment, I want to eat it.
The more I think, the more I want to eat.
>> The more I think of it, the more I want to eat it.
It seems like a drug.
>> It is like a drug.
I think pig is the present of God.
>> Correct
>> OR: I think pig is a gift from God.
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