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학생이 쓴 원문
It is good if the children want to be some profession of their parents.
But it is unhappy that parent force their children to continue their vested power
It is easy to become doctor or politician when their parents\' professions are in that.
It may be encourage to their children, but others feel unfair and depress relatively.
Many young generation want to live comfortably without suffering and challenging.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]!
Indeed. Having parents who work as professionals encourages their children to follow the path and choose their career in the future. And it is true that it is unfair for the young generation who don\'t have any connections in such a field. It sounds like their children, even if they have not finished their studies yet, already have a spot in the company or workplace of their parents. Enjoy the day!
Aki~
It is good if the children want to be some profession of their parents.
>>> It is good if the children want to be same profession as their parents.
But it is unhappy that parent force their children to continue their vested power.
>>> But it is unfortunate that parent force their children to continue their vested power.
It is easy to become doctor or politician when their parents\' professions are in that.
>>> It is easy to become a doctor or politician when their parents\' professions are in that.
It may be encourage to their children, but others feel unfair and depress relatively.
>>> It may be encouraging to their children, but others feel unfair and depressing relatively.
Many young generation want to live comfortably without suffering and challenging.
>>> Many young generations want to live comfortably without suffering and challenges.
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