Bowling club
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Today was the first day of bowling club.
>> Today is the first day of the bowling club.
My club teacher teached how to play bowling.
>> My club teacher taught me how to play bowling.
It was the first time so we had class at class. I enjoyed bowling so I joined bowling club.
>> It was the first time so we had class at class. I enjoyed bowling so I joined bowling club.
There was a lot of member so teacher said he will have 4members in a group.
>> There are a lot of members so, our teacher said he will have 4 members in a group.
I didn\'t know how to pose bowling. I learned that today but it\'s a little comfortable.
>> I didn\'t know the proper pose in bowling. I learned that today but it\'s a little comfortable.
On this week, baseball will be start. I am a little excited but a little sad because of upcoming test.
>> Correct
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