Boxer's name
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Hi Sir [이름]! They must have been legends in boxing. I\'m sure they were all great that\'s why they inspired you. Thanks for doing your homework. Feel free to add more details on your homework next time :). Talk to you later. ^^
~Teacher Marie~
My favorite boxers\' name were Ray Charles Leonard, Tomas Hearns, and Marvin Nathaniel Hagler.
>>My favorite boxers are Ray Charles Leonard, Tomas Hearns and Marvin Nathaniel Hagler.
They all were the middle-weight world Boxing champion and they fought each other and gave me a great pleasure when I was young.
>>They were all middle-weight world boxing champions and they fought each other and gave me great pleasure when I was young.
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