Boy Who Cried Wolf
학생이 쓴 원문
One boy's job is take care of sheep.
But he always boring!
So he joking his townspeople about wolves!
Townspeople don't belive him.
One day,a real wolf coming!
He helps townspeople very loudly!
But they don't belive him.
After a while, they are quiet.
So they go to the field, Oh no!
It is a real! They see a lot of bones.
I think,lie makes people die~^^
강사 첨삭
Hi! Thank you for sharing this story. Please be careful with your spelling next time. Take note of the proper verb tenses too okay? Check my corrections here. Have a good day!
~Teacher Meg~
One boy\'s job is take care of sheep.
>> There was a boy who is in charge of taking care of sheeps.But he always boring!
>> But he is always bored.So he joking his townspeople about wolves!
>> So he made a joke to the townspeople, saying that there were wolves.
OR >> So he joked around and told the townspeople that there were wolves. - betterTownspeople don\'t belive him.
>> The townspeople did not believe him.One day,a real wolf coming!>> One day, a real wolf came!He helps townspeople very loudly!
>> He asked for help from the townspeople.But they don\'t belive him.
>> But they did not believe him.
*Be careful with the spelling. ^^After a while, they are quiet.
>> After a while, they became quiet.So they go to the field,
>> They went to the field.Oh no! It is a real!
>> Oh no! It is real!
They see a lot of bones.>> They saw a lot of bones.I think,lie makes people die~^^
>> I think lying is dangerous and it could cause other people\'s death.
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