Boys and girls, be ambitious!
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that it is very important for a person to have big dreams and be ambitious.
In other words, it is essential to life rather than important.
Although all the big dream doesn\'t come true, there can be too much significant meaning in it.
This is a saying. \"A man lives eating the dream\"
Even though I am over 50 years old, the reason I study English is also like this.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Never stop dreaming.
You still have a full life ahead of you.
I wish you all the luck.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think that it is very important for a person to have big dreams and be ambitious.
>> Correct
In other words, it is essential to life rather than important.
In other words, it is essential to life rather than important.
>> Correct
Although all the big dream doesn\'t come true, there can be too much significant meaning in it.
Although all the big dream doesn\'t come true, there can be too much significant meaning in it.
>> Although not all big dreams come true, we can find significant meaning in them.
Even though I am over 50 years old, the reason I study English is also like this.
Even though I am over 50 years old, the reason I study English is also like this.
>> Even though I am over 50 years old, the reason I study English is also because of something like this.
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