Breakfast

2020-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

1. What food do you eat for breakfast? - I eat many kinds of food for breakfast. In fact, I most like a american breakfast. I love bread with butter, fried potato, fried egg, cheeze, bacon and coffe. But I didn\'t often eat that, because it is fattening. 2. What is the famous food for breakfast in your country? -In korea, most people eat korean home food for breakfast including rice, many kinds of soups and some side dishes.

강사 첨삭

Thank you Ms. [Name]! :)
~Lucy

I eat many kinds of food for breakfast.
>>CORRECT!
 In fact, I most like a american breakfast. 
>> In fact, I mostly like  American breakfast. 
I love bread with butter, fried potato, fried egg, cheeze, bacon and coffe. 
>>I love bread with butter, fried potato, fried egg, cheeze, bacon and coffee. 
But I didn\'t often eat that, because it is fattening.
>>CORRECT!
In korea, most people eat korean home food for breakfast including rice, many kinds of soups and some side dishes.
>>CORRECT!

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