breakfast
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually don\'t eat a breakfast except weekend.
If I eating breakfast, I want to eat more lightly.
I don\'t like full.
I think, It will be better fruits, bread and coffee.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ethan!
I like your composition.
It\'s short and snappy.
It definitely reflects your personal style.
Keep up the good work!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I usually don\'t eat a breakfast except weekend.
>> I usually don\'t eat breakfast except on the weekends.
If I eating breakfast, I want to eat more lightly.
If I eating breakfast, I want to eat more lightly.
>> If I eat breakfast, I just want it to be light.
I don\'t like full.
I don\'t like full.
>> I don\'t like to be full.
I think, It will be better fruits, bread and coffee.
I think, It will be better fruits, bread and coffee.
>> I think it would be better if I have fruits, bread and coffee in the morning.
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