Breather
학생이 쓴 원문
I think everyone needs a breather while working. As for me, going to my second house or traveling is the best way to take a breather. Actually it\'s difficult for me to take a rest without interrupted while in Seoul. As long as I don\'t turn off my phone, I always have to answer any calls from my instructors, students ,some parents, or new parents.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I can’t imagine how much you needed a breather with the schedule you had. It’s a good thing you’re not doing that anymore and now know your priorities in life.
-T. Caitlyn
I think everyone needs a breather while working.
>> CORRECT
As for me, going to my second house or traveling is the best way to take a breather.
>> CORRECT
Actually it\'s difficult for me to take a rest without interrupted while in Seoul.
>> Actually, it\'s difficult for me to take a rest without interruption while in Seoul.
As long as I don\'t turn off my phone, I always have to answer any calls from my instructors, students ,some parents, or new parents.
>> As long as I don\'t turn off my phone, I always have to answer calls from my instructors, students, some parents, or new parents.
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