Bring some stuff for hiking
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강사 첨삭
Hi, Thomas! Thank you for this. I am sure that you will do very well in English if you continue to do good work as you have been doing.
-Teacher Joy
Something bring to make more fun in the hiking are earphone, sunglasses, water and snacks.
>> To make hiking more fun, I bring items
such as earphones, sunglasses, water, and snacks.
The music make me more excited so I listen to the
music during the hiking.
>> The music makes me more excited, so I
listen to it during the hike.
Sunglasses is protective my eyes against the
sunshine.
>> Sunglasses protect my eyes against the
sunshine.
I can get enery from water and snacksSo I bring
them when I hike.
>> I can get energy from water and snacks, so I bring them when I hike.
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